  ### Arboricity is different from degeneracy: - "A classic bound on the degeneracy asserts that $\alpha(G)\leq \sqrt{2m}$ (Lemma 1 of )."  is related to the arboricity! The degeneracy $\alpha$ is the maximum of the minimum degree of any subgraph. The arboricity $\beta$ is the minimum number of forests needed to cover all edges in the graph. In , $\beta\leq ceil(\sqrt{2m+n})/2$ is proven. We have, $\beta \leq \alpha \leq 2 \beta − 1$. - "By a theorem of Chiba-Nishizeki , we can argue that the number of vertices in any set of the Turan shadow is at most $\sqrt{2m}$ (where $m$ is the number of edges in G)." We can actually state that the number of vertices in any set of the Turan shadow is at most $\alpha$ where $\alpha$ is the degeneracy of the input graph (in large and sparse real-world graphs we generally have $\alpha<<\sqrt{2m}$). ### Tight bound on the shadow size: "Indeed, we can design instances where Claim 5.7 is tight (a set of $n/\alpha$ Erdos-Renyi graphs $G(\alpha,1/3))$." It is not clear why this is a tight bound. $\alpha$ is the degeneracy of the input graph (the graph "$n/\alpha$ Erdos-Renyi graphs $G(\alpha,1/3))$" may not have degeneracy $\alpha$). ### Scalability of an enumeration procedure: "The primary challenge is combinatorial explosion. An autonomous system network with ten million edges has more than a trillion 10-cliques. Any enumeration procedure is doomed to failure." The fact that there can be "a trillion 10-cliques" may not be enough to discard an enumeration procedure. For instance, the program (counting from 1 to one trillion) generated by the following C code terminates within few minutes on a commodity machine. c main() { unsigned long long i=0; while (i ＜ 1e12) { i++; } }  ### Minors: - "Denote the number of k-cliques by $C$, then the success probability is $C/{ n \choose k}$. Thus, we can estimate this probability using ${ n \choose k}/C$ samples." This may need some explanations. ### Typos: - "It will be convenient to express this result in terms on k-clique densities."